A huge improvement and given the state of the art of hair transplantation today, the patient should have no complaints.
That being said, I have two comments.
Although the hairline isn’t simply a thick, obvious line, the leading edge of grafts do are along the same plane. I’m not sure why more doctors, who understand angulation and creating a serrated edge, don’t make the leading edge of hair placement a little less symmetrical.
The crown photos show something of a comb over.